Professor Michael J. Mouse Editor, Journal of Adolescent Health Department of Psychology University of Disneyland Anaheim CA 800921 August 2021S Dear Professor Mouse, Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript titled The Causal Relationships Among Sex, Television Viewing and Overweight in Young Adolescents, which was submitted to the Journal of Adolescent Health. After … Continue reading “Causal Relationships | My Assignment Tutor”
Professor Michael J. Mouse Editor, Journal of Adolescent Health Department of Psychology University of Disneyland Anaheim CA 800921 August 2021S Dear Professor Mouse, Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript titled The Causal Relationships Among Sex, Television Viewing and Overweight in Young Adolescents, which was submitted to the Journal of Adolescent Health. After carefully reviewing the manuscript, I’m afraid I cannot recommend it for publication. Further, given the serious faults inherent in the manuscript I am recommending that the article be rejected outright and that the author not be given the opportunity to re-submit an amended version of the manuscript. To be blunt, this is one of worst papers that I have ever reviewed. The manuscript is riddled with numerous errors in design, method, analysis, interpretation and presentation, which I have itemised below. I can only hope that for the sake of psychological science, this article is not accepted by a journal of lesser standing. Specific points of note: Please contact me if you require further detail on any of these points. Sincerely Discipline of Psychological Sciences Australian College of Applied Psychology
