Use this template to describe the feedback you received on Assignment 2. The comments should be written in your own words. Remember to write 5 sentences or refer to 5 specific points of feedback.
Describe the feedback you received from your instructor on Assignment 2.
You are doing very well. Please read through my feedback below and review the comments on the submission. Then, contact me if you have any questions.
Your introduction is doing well! However, the background information or thesis statement might be shorter than two sentences, or the hook might not be present. A good introduction requires a hook of one to two sentences, concise background information of two sentences, and a clear persuasive thesis statement of two sentences at the end of the introduction. All parts of the introduction must be clear, unified, and lead to the thesis statement. See ch. 6.6 and 6.7 regarding the introduction and ch. 4 regarding the thesis statement.
Good job! Your outline fulfills the requirements and will help you develop a well-organized, logical proposal. Keep up the good work.
Keep up the good work. You have restated the thesis statement clearly and concisely; the call to action is specific and practical. Well done.
Well done! You have clearly explained the uses of the audience appeals and clearly related them to your audience. Your examples were good and relevant. Good job!
Good job! The feedback is summarized in your words, and the reflection is thorough and shows an understanding of the feedback, including how it will be applied. By specifically discussing how the feedback will be used to improve the thesis, outline, and starting draft, you are well on your way to improve overall quality of written communication. Well done!!
You are off to a good start, but please edit carefully because 5-6 errors remain. As you know, you demonstrate your credibility through clear, concise writing, good organization, grammar, style, and correct use of Strayer Writing Standards.
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