It’s a dissertation exploring the effects of caffeine on working memory in a memory task. It’s based on a study by Stojanoski (2020), the provided part is an into/lit review covering cognition, memory and cognitive control. The overall idea is that caffeine enhances cognition. Feedback I was given: This section needs to be better organised- there’s a lot of information in there, not all of it logically ordered or relevant, or repeated, making it too long in the end. Also, use paragraphs to organise the information better. Is the Stojanoski study relevant, in terms of their interest in semantic information? Your first section is all about how positive caffeine is on cognition, but then on p.7 you suggest it might not be. (Why have you returned to caffeine again? And then you discuss WM again?)
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