Personal statement for residency into orthopaedic surgery.

Personal statement for residency into orthopaedic surgery. I would like for this draft to tell story and highlight my qualities while also addressing why I chose orthopaedics. I would also appreciate help with structure, making sure there is flow between paragraphs, wording/grammar, making sure everything ties in/makes sense, identifying areas that can be more “personal” and areas of redundancy.