This is a translation from my dissertation (I left out the citations and sub-cha

This is a translation from my dissertation (I left out the citations and sub-chapter editings).
I want the rewrite service to improve it to an academic writing level. I want to submit this paper ffor postdoctoral fellowships but English is not my first language.
The translation is good English but bad for academic level so this is what I want to change, I imagine the rewriting in this form.
Thank you!